Linux Open Source Presentation

[Okash Khawaja]

Thanks for all the feedback!

I have incorporated all except for diagrams for slides 7 and 18. If I
get time after work today, I will do that. The shadow on fonts is
because of format of slides provided by organisers. I will edit it to
remove the shadow.

No I haven't presented at this scale so thanks for the tips.

Best regards,
Okash


On Tue, Aug 13, 2019 at 9:08 AM Samuel Thibault
<samuel.thibault at ens-lyon.org> wrote:
>
> Hello,
>
> The slides look good overall :)
>
> For better readability (accessibility too? ;) ), I would say to avoid
> the small shadow being letters.
>
> I don't know which distros ship it, I'm afraid mostly only
> accessibility-oriented ones. But going out of staging will help so much
> on that front :)
>
> On slide 6 the URL is split, you can reduce its font size a bit.
>
> On slide 10 you could add a picture of the synth you have :)
>
> On slide 13 you should write on the slide the answer to the
> why-synth-to-CPU question, for people who will miss it in your talk:
> synths report their speaking progress.
>
> Slide 16: yes, a diagram would be useful :)
>
> If you have the time before the deadline, on slides 7 and 18 you could
> draw a picture to show the flow.
>
>
> I don't know if you have already made this kind of presentation.  If
> not, I strongly advise to train :) for two reasons:
>
> - train by yourself to get an idea of how it fits in the 35 minutes you
>   have, to know how much time you can spend on the details.
>
> - train in from of colleagues or friends (who have some technical
>   understanding), just to check how it feels to talk about it in front
>   of people :) and get their feedback as well (even if you will not be
>   able to change the slides).
>
> Samuel